Category: Poetry


Juxtaposition

So, to go along with the new bright color scheme, here’s a very dark poem about child abuse.

Not The Way it Ought to Be

But surely that’s not the norm,
Families taking such vile form,
Sisters at 6 years old to mourn?
Children going to bed with nothing to keep warm?

Surely that’s not the way it ought to be.
There’s a father who promises love unconditionally
Whether or not the dishes are done; see,
For Him, it’s ok just to be.

With all the hate, all rage and pain
With our other Father, we can regain
The life we’ve lost to our parents vain
And selfish with all their arguments inane.

Surely that’s not the way it ought to be.
A family who’s decree
Is pain and sadness confuses me,
I don’t understand how could we
As a people allow such travesty?

No support, no love, living alone
As children, when their parents are grown
Who, in their age, really should have known
A child needs reassurance, just throw them a bone

Surely that’s not how it ought to be.
Mimetic ghosts chasing, the children flee
Lost in their sanguine-filled sea
Surely, that’s not how it ought to be.

If only they knew about God’s love
The father whose mercy rains from above
The one who came down as a dove
And through ultimate sacrifice of

His son, He’s set us free.
Surely that’s the way it ought to be.
Wrapped in a warm blankee,
Ear to ear, smiling in glee

That there’s nothing to fear.
Sons and daughters near
To our Father who’s ear
A prayer never doesn’t hear.

Surely that’s the way it ought to be.
Brothers, sisters, mothers, daughters as holy family.
Surely that’s the way it ought to be.

NaBloPoMo? NotNoMo.

Well, today’s the last day of NaBloPoMo. I made it. Did you?

There were a few times that I didn’t have anything to say, or forgot to post until way late into the night, but you know, these things happen sometimes. I feel accomplished. Each word I type gives me a sense of glee to know that I actually finished something that I started. And I met all sorts of wonderful new people! I hope you all who started hanging around here will continue to do so. I’ll keep reading all of your lovely blogs because I thought they were so good.

Tomorrow is the big Conference day, and when it’s over, I’ll tell you all about what a mess it was putting it together, but for now, I’ve really got to get on this paper that I’m presenting for it tomorrow. I’ve been pouring over this poem for hours on end, and I’m making headway, but it’s fairly slow going. Things are, however, beginning to fall into place mentally, though; I’ve just got to start getting those ideas out of my head, off of my book and notebook, and into a word processor. After that? No sweat. 5-7 pages should just fall right out. I mean, I’ve done more prep work for this paper than I’ve done in a long time.

Also, I’ll post the paper here after a few months if I can’t get any takers for publication. The title is “Counting the Stars: A New Critical approach to Sir Philip Sidney’s Astrophil and Stella Sonnet 5.” If you’re interested, I can send it to you when I finish it, just comment and ask me.

Congratulations everyone for a job well done!

P.S. As a bonus, here’s the poem itself:

It is most true, that eyes are formed to serve
The, inward light; and that the heavenly part
Ought to be king, from whose rules who do swerve,
Rebels to Nature, strive for their own smart.
It is most true, what we call Cupid’s dart,
An image is, which for ourselves we carve;
And, fools, adore in temple of our heart,
Till that good god make Church and churchmen starve.
True, that true beauty virtue is indeed,
Whereof this beauty can be but a shade,
Which elements with mortal mixture breed;
True, that on earth we are but pilgrims made,
And should in soul up to our country move;
True; and yet true, that I must Stella love.

Enjoy!

In Which I Explain My Goings On

So, I’ve been pretty busy over the last few days. I’ve been planning a conference that’s being held this coming Saturday at my school, and I’ve been trying to get a paper written for said conference. I thought I’d share a little bit of how I’ve been doing the research for it, so I took a few pictures of part of my notes.

The text in question is Sir Philip Sidney’s Astrophil and Stella Sonnet #5, and I’ll be presenting a new critical analysis of those 14 lines of poetry. Have a look:

Here’s the text, with some of my annotations. Yes, it’s just the little part, not anything around it.

Next is my trusty Moleskine notebook.

And finally, you can see the two together, to get an idea of what I do with textual analysis.

That’s pretty much it! Go check out my Flickr page to see those pictures and some extra explanation about them.

One more day! Whew! It’s been long, but I’m glad I’ve made it thus far!

Should it Please the Court

After some comments about the darkness of my poetry, I thought I’d share something with a bit (but only a little bit) of a sunnier outlook.

This is one of few poems that I didn’t finish in the same sitting in which I started it. At the time, I didn’t know how it would end. Everything was up in the air, transitioning, and I had no idea where I nor anything else would land.

The ending came several months later when I realized that everything was going to work out, and I’d be OK. Here it is:

“Faces in the Crowd”

I try to hide my sorrow, my confusion,
But all I find, all around is frustration.
The music’s faded, subtle persuasion
That maybe, just maybe, there’s culmination.

The days have grown long;
The feeling faded with the song;
Bells banging loudly, I can’t shake the gong.
Falling from whom I thought I belong.

I thought wrong; things went fast.
What did I think? Why should it last?
My betrothed I loved, now in my past.
Trudging my way forward, trumpets do blast

Revily for new morning
The sun on a new day shining
The light, chances blinding
Onward I go, toward goals unyielding.

For every day I’m thankful.
Of days past I’m mindful.
Those…were wonderful;
These…are painful,

But the world moves ever onward.
And me? I’ll keep facing forward,
Not looking forever backward
At loves and thoughts gone skyward.

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