Comments on: Cocoon http://www.thursdays-child.net/2008/05/09/cocoon/ Wed, 01 Sep 2010 11:00:18 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: patrick http://www.thursdays-child.net/2008/05/09/cocoon/comment-page-1/#comment-1761 patrick Sun, 18 May 2008 13:41:40 +0000 http://www.tylerfontaine.com/?p=125#comment-1761 I'm glad to be here. I can relate with the bit about feeling irrelevant at times - just another cog in the machine and all that sort of self loathing nonsense. Anyhow, I hope you don't feel this sort of depression too much, and if you do, keep writing. It's very creative. When I'm depressed, I find my spirits lifted after expressing some downer material. Doing so seems to be a good way to part with one's woes. Either way, I'm glad things are looking up for you. paz. patrick. I’m glad to be here. I can relate with the bit about feeling irrelevant at times – just another cog in the machine and all that sort of self loathing nonsense. Anyhow, I hope you don’t feel this sort of depression too much, and if you do, keep writing. It’s very creative. When I’m depressed, I find my spirits lifted after expressing some downer material. Doing so seems to be a good way to part with one’s woes. Either way, I’m glad things are looking up for you. paz. patrick.

]]> By: Thursday's Child http://www.thursdays-child.net/2008/05/09/cocoon/comment-page-1/#comment-1751 Thursday's Child Thu, 15 May 2008 14:56:26 +0000 http://www.tylerfontaine.com/?p=125#comment-1751 Sarah: You're too kind. Thanks :) Sarah: You’re too kind. Thanks :)

]]> By: Sarah http://www.thursdays-child.net/2008/05/09/cocoon/comment-page-1/#comment-1749 Sarah Thu, 15 May 2008 00:23:22 +0000 http://www.tylerfontaine.com/?p=125#comment-1749 I love this poem. It reads so well. The words flow together creating wonderful images. Even from the way it's set up when you read it it seems to move, to flow. The ending was marvelous, just marvelous. I love this poem. It reads so well. The words flow together creating wonderful images. Even from the way it’s set up when you read it it seems to move, to flow. The ending was marvelous, just marvelous.

]]> By: Thursday's Child http://www.thursdays-child.net/2008/05/09/cocoon/comment-page-1/#comment-1748 Thursday's Child Wed, 14 May 2008 18:44:15 +0000 http://www.tylerfontaine.com/?p=125#comment-1748 Patrick! Good friend, it's good to see you here. While the worm may serve its purpose in nature, when one, as a human, feels no greater than a worm, one feels irrelevant. I'm glad you like it! Cheers, mate. Patrick! Good friend, it’s good to see you here.

While the worm may serve its purpose in nature, when one, as a human, feels no greater than a worm, one feels irrelevant.

I’m glad you like it!

Cheers, mate.

]]> By: patrick http://www.thursdays-child.net/2008/05/09/cocoon/comment-page-1/#comment-1746 patrick Wed, 14 May 2008 12:13:43 +0000 http://www.tylerfontaine.com/?p=125#comment-1746 Worms, my friend, are not irrelevant. They are a crucial part of every ecosystem, living (and consumed) in soil and sea. Some worms are also vital in the production of fertile, arable lands. In short, we owe a lot to the worm. Anyhow, I like your writing. A good concrete poem seems to be a rare find these days. take it all with tranquility, patrick Worms, my friend, are not irrelevant. They are a crucial part of every ecosystem, living (and consumed) in soil and sea. Some worms are also vital in the production of fertile, arable lands. In short, we owe a lot to the worm.
Anyhow, I like your writing. A good concrete poem seems to be a rare find these days.
take it all with tranquility,
patrick

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