After some comments about the darkness of my poetry, I thought I’d share something with a bit (but only a little bit) of a sunnier outlook.
This is one of few poems that I didn’t finish in the same sitting in which I started it. At the time, I didn’t know how it would end. Everything was up in the air, transitioning, and I had no idea where I nor anything else would land.
The ending came several months later when I realized that everything was going to work out, and I’d be OK. Here it is:
“Faces in the Crowd”
I try to hide my sorrow, my confusion,
But all I find, all around is frustration.
The music’s faded, subtle persuasion
That maybe, just maybe, there’s culmination.
The days have grown long;
The feeling faded with the song;
Bells banging loudly, I can’t shake the gong.
Falling from whom I thought I belong.
I thought wrong; things went fast.
What did I think? Why should it last?
My betrothed I loved, now in my past.
Trudging my way forward, trumpets do blast
Revily for new morning
The sun on a new day shining
The light, chances blinding
Onward I go, toward goals unyielding.
For every day I’m thankful.
Of days past I’m mindful.
Those…were wonderful;
These…are painful,
But the world moves ever onward.
And me? I’ll keep facing forward,
Not looking forever backward
At loves and thoughts gone skyward.

I don’t mind the dark stuff so much. This was a nice change of pace, though, even if only a slight one. However, I now have that “When the music fades…” song stuck in my head. Time to turn up the jazz! And the Christmas music! And the Christmas jazz!!
Rachelskirts: Well, I’m glad you like it. You seem to be the only one. haha Enjoy your Christmas music!
I like the triumphant feel in this. The darkness is what makes that part so strong.
And, you know, this really has the feel of lyrics, like there’s a song here waiting to be sung.
It’s nice to see the optimism. Keep looking forward!
This is a beautiful work, Tyler.
Pssh.. Mine isn’t better. I really like your poem, it flows rather nicely and I like it quite a bit.
Jamie: I’ll keep that in mind!
Mom: Hey, you know me. Thanks.
Chelle: Thanks!
Sarah: I’m glad you like it. From you, that means quite a lot.